Revisions and Reposts

I’ve been quiet for a while as I’ve been busy revising the novel. Turns out I overwrote quite a bit of it and infodumped a great deal. My revisions attempt to address those shortcomings.

Turns out revising didn’t turn out to be quite the drag I thought it would be. I’m finding bits and pieces I needed to take care of, lose ends that needed to be tied up. I’m posting the revised Chapter 1 in its entirety, for comparison purposes.

Keep reading (and writing) everyone!

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